I wrote this song right out of high school so forgive me if its a little dramatic.
Nice!
You sounded kinda sad and a bit wobbly with your voice a little after the start but then you came back into it nicely after a while, but I'm really enjoying the guitar melody it was pretty kick ass! You should try layering this with some bass or rhythm guitar.
I agree. These are all rough cuts. I need to sit down with a good drum machine program so i can fill it all in
Nice
A little dramatic, yes. But not unwholesome. It's a pleasant listen.
Thanks. I like honesty
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
BahBahBurten 
