You sounded kinda sad and a bit wobbly with your voice a little after the start but then you came back into it nicely after a while, but I'm really enjoying the guitar melody it was pretty kick ass! You should try layering this with some bass or rhythm guitar.
I agree. These are all rough cuts. I need to sit down with a good drum machine program so i can fill it all in
A little dramatic, yes. But not unwholesome. It's a pleasant listen.
Thanks. I like honesty