Hmm. Needs work.

Good chord progression, but everything else could use a little love.

First and most noticably, your chords eat everything else up in the mix. And they're clipping like crazy it sounds like. Definitely EQ that *more*. Also throwing a limiter or a soft clipper on its mixer channel would help with clipping. As is, it's drowning out the percussion. Now that I think about it, it feels like the percussion in general could really use some more compression.

Next I think you might want to add some stereo seperation to the synth, maybe some reverb too, to widen the sound a bit. Or you could simply just pan different notes in the chord. Anything would help, it's very 'mono' at the moment.

And lastly, some ambient sounds or melodies laid over the mix couldn't hurt. House songs are generally repetitive, so you'll need something to keep the listener's attention, besides simply having the basic chord progression of the song and a four on the floor drum beat. Just switch it up and keep introducing new elements to make it that much more interesting.

Keep it up
-Orange