so ive add a new instrument and ive done some stuff to the dynamics to try to amplify a climax for the song but i feel that its not quite good enough for me i would only give it a 7 or 8 myself :( in a few years ill have to come back to it
You're getting better
Some of the sounds don't seem to mesh well, but..I'm a newb to this genre so it's just personal oppinion. Anyways. You're definitely getting better, and I can tell from this. Your mastering and sound techniques are improving. Keep working for this. It has key potential. :3
8/10
5/5
thanks i worked a lot on this one trying to make it good
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It sounds as if you didn't do very much with the song. The climax is a little cheap, it gets very repetitive but I really liked 2:04- 2:30. The song is good overall, but I KNOW that you can do much better.
ya i know i just have no idea what to do with this its like its making fun of me for not being good enough to finish it
what was changed was dynamics and an added synth so ya not a lot changed :(
Fived
Sounding pretty interesting at the moment. I'm not not sure what; but I think the song is lacking something... :S
Maybe a bit more depth with some sweeps, pads, etc. Really liking it so far decoy!
5/5 8/10
ya im at a stand still with this piece of crap i dont know what to do with it i thinking im just gona wait until im actually good at making music with these programs
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
decoyultimatum 
