did you ever write poetry
ur lyrics are like poems with alot of nice juicy words and ideas. like eternal said keep carving away at ur rhythm. try and find a way to keep those great lyrics and form them into a steady flow. although u might be on to something rapping in such a different way. no matter what keep practicing.
have u tried freestyling by urself? it helps focus more on rhythm than words for me and i think its good practice even if their weak verses. that "im a cynical individual" stanza is a great example of clean words just falling into the beat. u didnt have to force the words in the beat. ur stuff is real fun to listen to and i love the themes of history and spiritual realms. thats shits so dope to me. keep hacking it man