I like the carefree innocence conveyed in this piece. I feel that this would work well as very quiet, subtle looping background music for somewhere like a library, or a garden - in a game or a flash animation, this is.
I like the dynamic variety in this piece. I know that this is an improv, yet I feel that this piece does not have as much strength as an individual piece of work i.e if I were to listen to it on my own without an accompanying clip/game etc, I would get bored quickly because it repeats itself a lot. Perhaps also it would have been worth trying to include some deeper bass notes? To give the piece a more rich and varied texture. For example, prelude in C major by Bach, is an example of how a few bass notes can be used to really bring a piece to life.
Overall, well done. Keep exploring the music & practicing :)
Ah great comment thank you! Yes indeed this is just an improvisation and yes I know it is quite repetitive - as I mentioned I'm not a piano player at all, just exploring around. But your suggestions are really good I'll definitely keep them in mind!
It was nice.
I liked it, it was soft and sweet, with a beautiful sort of simplicity to it. :3
Thanks for the comment - I'm not a too skillfull piano player so the simplicity is originated from that fact but I'm glad you liked the song after all!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.