Sounds like a good start!

This is a cool riff, it has an intriguing sound, as i often find is the case with your music : ). So you have a whole project going on, neat!

good..but

the song is good,but when there are passed 30 seconds is boring,when you reach 20 seconds you must ....i don't know......do a different rithim....or starting singing...or starting a metal track :D if a song is all the time the same,in 30 seconds it becomes boring! be carefuL!