Occasionally, being out of tune can say a lot more than simply being in tune constantly. And, though I understand it sounds harsh or unattractive to the ear, I think those notes adds even more to the otherworldly quality of this piece by comparison of those notes to the others. Sort of like how there are bits of a dream that nearly cause you to wake up because of their obvious discordance with your own mental image of reality.

This is a pretty song.

So many people try so hard to make their music so complicated and it loses the feel that some songs just naturally have. This song is really simple, and that's part of what makes it sound so beautiful.

Though, I have two complaints.
-Starting at around :42 or so, you start picking some of the other notes on guitar and it came to my attention that some of the notes are slightly out of tune. If you can fix the tuning, then this mid-section of the song would sound fantastic.

-The song's too short. I found myself wanting more at the end.

Great stuff, man.
-Autumn Collapse

Greatness

I love your indie music! Bro this is pure soul man. they are really stress killers bro. It helps you think alot and it can be used to paint a really great image. I'll probably be in contact with you really soon because there is a project that me and uncleare working on and we'll be needing music for it so be on the look out.

good

i like it, i really do, but id like to see a build in it, its relaxing as it is but it feels like the start of a song, maybe go somewhere darker with it at 00:50 and give it more of a story, but i like it as is as well

Yeah...

I must agree with the others reviews dude, too short perhaps you had a writer block and couldn't continue with that amazing and relaxing tune you have here haha but anyway it's going to my favorites songs 'cause that arpeggio (I think...) is awesome, keep on rockin' dude