Not bad, not great.

I know that there is a lot of build up in the Trance genre and that the same tune gets repeated a lot, but seriously, I thought whole song was looping until I checked to see that it was just ending.

I am not trying to be mean. The song builds up a lot, but the whole melody or background or something just isn't different enough. Something needs to change as the song progresses.

Or another possibility is that things changed too fast and the song ended up feeling like a loop inside of itself since there were only so many ways to make a tune different but the same.

Man, I hope this makes sense.

Anyways, it wasn't bad, it wasn't great, but it was good.

really good man

well i can disagree with DjClyme, i can see why you out the snare there to build suspend back up to the song. might be that i think it fits, some may disagree, depends on the person i guess. well anyways keep it up.

not bad

so i like this alot. the piano melody is to simple and would be a lot better if more was added to it. the snare at 2:41 is so overused, maybe get a better sample(if you need one I have a few i could send you some how). and one other thing, the lead synth is a little repetitive, it would make this a ton better to add a second melody!

overall this is going to be a great piece and i cant wait to hear the final vesion!

5|5 8|10 nice work so far :)

DJ~CLYME