I think you've nearly got it.
Here's how to make it better:
If you like this kind of Dubstep, put more growls in it. If you're DAW doesn't let you do that, download some from www.looperman.com
The drop was weak. To make this better, add more bass (as I just said), and use WHITE NOISE to make the sound fuller. If you don't know what white noise is, try this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BzujrStf_TE (if that one doesn't help there are tons of videos out there)
That's about it.
Could you check out my music? That would be awesome!
This was good
I do agree with bobbys1015, the piano was amazing. I don't think your drop was anti-climactic, in fact I think i worked really well. The one thing I felt this song was lacking was a variation of the bass tone, your warp and worbles could use a bit of variation also maybe trying to sync the feel of the base with the mood you already set up with the piano. When I first listened to the piano I was very chilled and was enjoying the mood, though your bass breaks that mood. Personally it felt a little out of place a more slow warp sound would have suited and fitted the piano much more. A song should be consistent in the feeling it gives your listener in my opinion, but hey I am not all that good at making music my self I have just listened to it my whole life.
Yeah. It wa my 3rd attempt and I'm STILL even now trying to get the hang of dubstep. I'm no good at electro and rawr basses, the only exception being Virtuism (which even now is still getting voted down, while it's only at 4.06 or something. It was in the top on dubstep for a while... damn trolls)
Equasion of intencity
30 seconds- lovely
1:05- MIND EXPLOSION
2:25- Calming back down
2:55- Back to EXPLOSION
In all realness i loved it!
Oh sun-AP! Things be gettin' mathematical up in this bitch! Wait... that's no equation :(.
Thanks for liking it regardless.
The piano made the song...
The drop to me was anti-climactic... I was expecting alot more when reading your comments. the bass didn't have enough variation ( not in beat but in... i guess pitch.. )
it got a bit repetitive.
The piano was amazing :). Every part with the piano i loved.
Keep up the good work. Sounds like potential.
Well, at least it's some actual criticism.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.