Coooool.

Awesome !
Amazing density in it, that's a powerful short song. Effective and visibly not that simple to do. Your industrial melody is bringing an unhealthy side, with the use (i guess, at least it sounds like) of micro intervals and metallic sound.
Great bass and drums too. Good work on effects.
Maybe you can now think about a real ending.
5/5 and 9/10.