I like it :D

I really like how you mixed a few of the melodies together into one, and you did a good job in keeping the same sort of atmosphere as the original. Some more FX probably would have made it a bit stronger, but it's fine as it is in that regard.
At first I wasn't sure if the background arp/synth would work, but I was quickly proven wrong; it sounds great :P
Some more bass might have also made it stronger, but I think that applies to the original as well so, yeah.
Really liked the piano bit, it was a great change of pace.
While the ending could have been better than it was, I think you did it well.
Great job and thanks for remixing it :D
10/10

More, please!

This was good, but it could have been better. I liked how it built from small to big, but it could have been bigger. What I mean is, you didn't have very many different sounds. Add more instruments, create your own little break in the middle, put in extra sounds! Even if you keep the melody the same, add more instruments as you approach the end to keep that build from the beginning. Add some lower synths, maybe a rock guitar, an electric sound, etc.

P.S. You're drums were very good. I'm impressed. Finding the right drum sounds is the hardest part for me.