Has a very heavenly feel to it at first, though I'd reduce the time you have it incredibly quiet, it would strengthen the song in my opinion for sure. I didn't care much for the fade back into quite and then dark drop, maybe it would sound better if the dark drop happened sooner? But I'm not sure. I am sure that the song would be successful as just a pretty piece like you have it for the first minute and a quarter. Just my thoughts, keep up the good work ^_^