BN we got that agang CRIMSON STRAWBERRY ALMIGHTY!!
that KUSH!!!! you got allies remember that!! goodluck in the tourny you got my best wishes!
- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- A-GANG (Almighty Records)
- Real-Over-Fake -(Approved)
Author Comments
So after listening to BigRed's hype track, i decided my previous entry is nowhere near worthy... so I decided to write a completely new 1 today, and here u go=)
btw the beat is from "Wu Tang Clan meets the indie culture vol 1" titled: Introduction
A battle hardened broken needle
Bitch smacking bitch rappin people
better bring a backpack
if you wanna bring ya limbs back
bruises so fat ya mic n ya butt cheeks look attached
Badly beaten like baseball bat bone brushing teeth
Beast breath push ya tongue into retreat
Black body bags for every red mic light lit
Boxing out any blue blood that I didn't get to sip
And any bruise that I drip, can suck on a big red brick
Borderline bust a bitch BN trademarks bic
Burn barns with animal rappers begging to get bit
Makin a mic switch bend back into a bandage kit
Bearing bad news back from the battle riffle tip
Brain boggling to lose so quick
but a blank bank shot ain't sh*t
Bring the ball back by whip
Make skin skip like banana clip split
Blocks of bleach for any black thought on ya sheet
BN suggests retreat before the bed sores put you back to sleep
Big Red said: you gotta prove yourself worthy
Best step up to the knockout
cuz bum fight ain't fo' me
Broken-Needle responds:
good looks man n u already know we got that shit over here=)
Meh, sounds like your getting better.
I like the high frequency/quick hittin rhymes you got going with this. Dude you going crazy with the alliteration!
Writing wise: Metaphorical; but the connections arent very relevant.
EX. "bruises so fat ya mic n ya butt cheeks look attached" If you were to replace ass cheeks with the cheeks on ya face, this line would make a little more sense. Unless you're tring to suggest that rappers are flowing out the ass when they get up to the mic. Just a thought...
Good luck in the knockout Broken Needle
Broken-Needle responds:
in that line in particular I'm saying I'm rippin dudes new assholes with their own microphone; while using the letter B <3 so thank you, I'll see you as well sir=)
#HHH
How can I say this nicely? It's been like... 4 years now? and you still can't flow on a beat? That should tell you something lil man. #Go figure
I give you points on the beat selection.
-RMP
Broken-Needle responds:
it's been 4 years and you still the most disrespected n***a on this site... still ain't come back from "black rob" from 4 years back boy... i would shut my worm hole if i were your sore ass cheeks
Its alright.
Im not gonna hate on your mic quality cause god knows my mic is terrible right now.
Wasn't bad at all since you tried to start every word with B, am I the only one who noticed that? I'm not really feelin' it to be honest but, I don't know, you probably could've done better if you didn't try to start every word with B. Its not bad, though.
Broken-Needle responds:
lol, I tried to name the song B'n to hint it, but I could've done better I completely agree, even with using B's=) good looks on the review man, and I appreciate the honesty
Killr anfhem!
yo man dis like meth man, gon dowlode it 4 my frend. dis is like radio song i here on radio in today what u do 2 make sound pro?
Broken-Needle responds:
thanks a lot man=) i'm glad u like it so much, it's mostly in the writing: I used a method used repetition where I used words that start with the letter B=) but if you're asking mixing wise the only thing i did was this process called restoration, where u take a blank piece of the track take a sound sample and then simply remove that type of sound from the rest of the track: it helps remove a lot of the back round noise.
anyways man I appreciate the support, thanks a lot=)
Credits & Info
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4.84 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Feb 18, 2011
- 12:19 PM EST
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
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- 1.2 MB
- 1 min 20 sec
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