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Nov 27, 2009 | 3:21 PM EST
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2 min 10 sec
3.41 / 5.00

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Rated 3.41 / 5 stars
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Inspired by MF Doom

beat by MF Doom: "Agrimony"

Ayo it's the villain
I'm chillen wit doom
So soon we'll b chillin wit you
Tell a hero ur with me
You get me?(pause)
Before I break off
best save n hit pause(pause- think about it)
Go grab a purse first
I bet ya puss hurts
You just an ordinary nobody
Like the rest of the world
That's y im grabbin ya girl(pause)
Ight u got me,
u can have her
She STEEL ain't want u back?(pause)
Aw what's the matter?
I'm guessin she'd rather
Get on some villain dick
Before she feelin ya shit
I only play dirty
that's y she feelin sick
U gotta leave bitch
outta my life like bad dreams
I'm here to stay like trees
See the hero leaves on please
I say no thank you(pause)
I am the disease
fuckin the patient
So fill up this bag
I'm glad we just had
this altercation
I was waiting for the occasion
Like science and experimentation
So many ways to go wrong
And I'm not making mistakes
I aint taking the chance
I'm breakin the stakes
So u can set em in place
While I take the money and dip
To tell u the truth
It's funny I don't need a whip
That's why I'm the villain
Like doom I be stealin
This feelin I'm feelin
Will bring the world
spin to an end
And how soon will it end?
I say

So grab ya bitches and friends
Tell em I don't want ya money
So burn that shit
before u burn first
Say goodbye to church
Cuz Satan is stronger
He had ya heart longer
I say to hell with it
long as u burnin
have another hit
Stick up ya head
where it might fit
shit this is it
I got what I needed
This battle
is no longer heated
Cuz I took the son on
And I bet u can guess
how it left off
Badly bleedin and bruised
I'm just reachin the fuse
I don't play by the rules
You can call my moves foul
So go grab a towel
Cuz I will devour
Any word with a vowel
Just so u can't scream
Just to enjoy the scene
With nothing in between(pause - just the way i like it)
My super power is psychic
Cuz I say-
because there is-
nothing "huh?"
hate to break it to ya
but there really is-
Just God's way of hunting
Call me his word
with an s
Cuz the way I go
straight to ya chest
You wouldn't kno
last from next
but don't worry
it's gonna b
It's gotta b
It just has to b



Rated 4 / 5 stars

I like it.

The writing is impressive; from beginning to end you stay on your topic. The lyrics are clever and I like the use of multis. Like Merc said, you could use a little more emotion and attitude in what you say, it sounds like you were reading these lyrics at some times, for example: "She STEEL ain't want u back?(pause)Aw what's the matter?". Clearly you didn't use any overdubs on this, so I gotta give ya props on that. Dubs could've added some more expression at parts; but of course you gotta master natural mic presence before you mix in extra vocals. I'm definitely digging the beat, MF Doom is elite.

Broken-Needle responds:

MF DOOM KILLLS IT, lol and ma mans Vast Aire in Supafrienz is like a wet dream come true, lmao. The whole thing is read cuz im a lazy fuck(dun got 2 much free time rly) but ye still got much more work to do. Glad u like it man, thanks a lot for the review=) (PS the lyrics are intended to have multiple meanings{jus like all my other songs} cuz that's the way I like em, appealing to lots of diff ppl.)


Rated 4 / 5 stars


your getting better man now work on more enthusiasm on your voice like when you say words say em with more power, but your def gettin better

Broken-Needle responds:

glad u like it man, I'ma work on that next time=) thanks 4 the review


Rated 5 / 5 stars


I like how you got the bigger words out

Broken-Needle responds:

=) wut bout the short 1s? lol


Rated 5 / 5 stars


hey man

u got your flow right on here.

well written lyrics.

solid beat aswell

good job man

-¦- CKC -¦-

Broken-Needle responds:

glad u liked it man=) more to come soon


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hey there sexy villian

nice song ;D

Broken-Needle responds:

hey sexy accomplice<3 mwuah