Very Nice

I really like this song, I must say the main beat is very impressive and kept me bobbing up and down to the rhythm very well. However I feel like you overuse it quite a bit throughout the song. And instead of making it the part that draws you in for the melody it "is" the melody of this song. So instead of trying to make a really cool drum melody into an ok song it would probably sound better if you tried to take your really cool drum melody and turn it into the background of the intense parts of a song.

You can see an example of what I'm trying to say if you youtube "Techno Dream Trance- In The Silence" around the 55 second mark. Its a very catchy drum / bass rhythm however the song is not focused on it. If you tried to copy this and put some good melodies above your beat this song would be fantastic, the long drawn out tones just don't seem to fit in perfectly in my opinion.

Please note that I like this song and I feel like you can do a very good job and get better which is why I'm commenting saying what I think about it :) good luck on future peices!

wicked chill i lovedit

i like it man not one thing crossed my mind when i thought of things to say for constructive criticism keep it up!