Not bad!
I'm liking the sound of it! Mixing is pretty decent too although im not sure if you used EQ's and compressors on this etc. The melodies in this were pretty nice too, and when they second synth came in it all flowed really well.
Something that would really make the difference would be helping the kick drum to stand out a lot more. Perhaps throw a limiter on your kick and choose the preset "Drum compression 2" then after that, sidechain your synths to the kick and your track will start pumping. That would really help the track out!
However, what yu have here is brilliant. Don't get me wrong, it sounds great as it is now! I'm just trying to let ya know what you could do to make it even more better (:
Brilliant track, well done!
Keep the music flowing!
Your friend,
Dan Roth