my say
leave it to a extent
but put on
crowd(lage group of raving people) sounds e.g claping ,cheering,
small amuont of stereo feedback
loads more base (make as basey as hell)
put a slightly slower beat on there something like a walking pace
huge jumps of base boom at the ends of that der... der der thing bit(yay non spisficness)
not sure if youll be able to understand this
good start