The Dark Lord Approaches
She groans in pain from the wound she just endured. The Dark Lord luaghs at her and kicks her to the ground. She grunts "ergh"! He pulls out his tiny hidden dagger. He says to her "See you on the other side girl"! He impales her.She dies (lol). Her sword begins to glow. The Dark lord thinks "wtf"? She gets back up thinking only one thing. "How the hell am i alive o.O"? The sword acts on its own and takes her hand makes her plunge the sword into his torso. He says "How the $%#@ did that happen"?! He dies (fail). She says "IDK"! The End
Your Bit Masta
Fate.... can be terrible.. and terribly wonderful.
'She saw her fate before her. She saw her past behind her. Then, as she chose, she didn't see anything at all; and it didn't matter... SHE GOT FIRST PLACE THIS WEEK!
Intro/Outro: The intro starts very strong and I know immediately that this is going to be a powerful, booming track. Very good job setting the mood. Wait... this song is only two and a half minutes!?!? This loops perfectly I didn't even notice the length! ...Obviously I did, but hey, my point is that this loop transitions better than any I've ever heard for this genre.
SFX/Beat/Synth: Speaking of transitions, I never heard once an idle point in this song. Usually songs without 'rests' are very tiring on the ears. This however, is as pleasing to listen to to me as trance and DnB. And trust me, I listen to A LOT of DnB. Anyway, your selection of instruments, heavy drums, wind, well-placed cymbals and greatly executed vocals just go to show why this got first place. Is there really anything else to say?
Conclusion: Well yes there is. The only ONLY pointer I have to give you is that to my ears the vocals and drums seem only a tiny bit too loud. They tend to drown out the sound of the other elements, but maybe this was your purpose and anyway, the vocals and drums sound great.
Great job, very epic, and a well earned 5. Keep it up!
thats it cool
I feel like me versing a horde of spartans and Im just fighting to my death.... so epic
Definatly the number 1!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.