Yeah
It's unfinished as you said. I love the melody. Change the hi hat loop that starts when the hi hats first come in. You could possibly add some better samples for the drums in general but that mostly depends on what you have at your disposal.
I posted this originally yesterday but I changed it slightly so I figured I would re upload it
this is my first song with a homemade supersaw, made using 3XOSC
the bass is iffy, I have no samples, didn't wanna take the time to make one, so I used the basic dance kick and just messed with it to make a quick bass
there's a weird distortion in the beginning I can't get rid of, deal with it lol
Yeah
It's unfinished as you said. I love the melody. Change the hi hat loop that starts when the hi hats first come in. You could possibly add some better samples for the drums in general but that mostly depends on what you have at your disposal.
Hey man idk if you're still on here, but I ended up making a different version of this called "my dogs name is pancakes"
Go listen lol I know like 8 years later hahaha
Such a long shot
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.