I already uploaded this the other day but drastically re effected it so I wanted to reup it to get a fresh score and some new listeners!
I was going for a hard trance sound, using a relatively hard kick, and a WIP reverse bass. still think it needs a tad tweaking but for 3xosc I think its pretty effing good
I made all my sounds with 3xosc and ts404 bassline synth
this is my first WIP since 2012 so be gentle when rating, I'm not asking for 5s across the board, just don't destroy the score just because its unfinished!
it will be finished soon, take it for what it is :)
R3SP4WN's a good guy. I will admit ( publicly as reviews cant be undone ) i should have been more constructive crit and less hate.
Down to buisness this is a great improvement. I still feel the bass drowned out the melody. I like the minamalstic style though. EQ could be tweaked for ballence of the sounds.
Enjoyed the chill end at around 1:50.
Saw a review you left on Pixel's page, so I thought I might give you a listen.
For homemade synths I guess I can't be too hard on it, not that the synths are bad, I just feel like they don't meld together like they should.
My biggest gripe about the piece is that it feels like there's too little going on; there's big pauses in the melody that I feel like shouldn't be there.
As far as chord agreeing goes, it's a trance piece, so I guess that the slight discord is intentional and adds into the idea that it was supposed to be trance, but I definitely felt like this was a drum and bass throughout despite that I feel like the synths weren't meant to be bases.
Overall not bad, but I think it could use a good bit of tweaking before the finished product.
this is sick as fuck! i can get down to this for sure.
hahah awesome man :)
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