Well here it is.
Hmm if I were to guess what's missing it would be a substitution for a drum to keep one steady beat the whole way and change different beats but keep it. Argh I'm horrible at explaining. I hope you get my point it's pretty good but not my style but it's creative so I give it a 7/10 4/5 I'm being nice with the 4/5 :P I wanted 3.5 xD