HAHA

You finally made something not IDM.

Next you should totally play Mary had a little lamb with that bass drum

Now go listen to my newest song (it rocks)

Rad! Ooooh!

If this is hardstyle, it's great.
I like that it has energy.
The intro is stunning. I think
the middle, where the vocals are
is not only thought provoking
but moving.
The song has a good feel to it.
It's not too hard. It's not too soft.
It doesn't drown the listener or deafen the listener.
Not only that it has the Sessilenomad touch to it, as
usual.
This is great. Keep up the good work.

Ouch thats nice.

The intro caught my ear right from the start. The vocals started it off well, so nice call on those. Its also a pretty interesting buildup, but it is a bit too long, so that put me off a bit. The lack of real percussion was also a bit of a let down. I ussually look forward to hearing your glitchy drums, but the constant driving bass beat wasnt exactly the same and i cant say that i liked it that much. As a song, its a tad repetitive, mostly the first part. The rest is decently worked out and layed out. Overall, its a pretty good song, energetic in some parts, calm in others. I can say that it kept me listening to the very end. Nice work!

SCORE:
Intro = 2/2
Outro = 2/2
Blend = 2/2
Transitions = 2/3
Bass = 2/2
Originality = 3/3
Drums = 0/2
Melodies = 4/4
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Score = 17/20 = 8.5/10

Note: This is your review from the NGADM Round 1 and as always im posting it here for your convenience.

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Good melodies and trippy effect...

But the lack of percussion drives me away.

I see what you did there at the beginning! Anyways, this is a pretty interesting intro/buildup, takes awhile, but I like how you add enough every little bit to keep me interested... Then it goes to the expression message, which is actually quite interesting. The part following, good melody, but bring it into something more faster. Once that's done, add more drums! The single beats seem to deter me from this, because I feel percussion is a big need in any song. Ignoring the lack of percussion, the melodies in the part are still good, and have a bit of a trippy effect to them.

Those drums/percussions are needed though. I agree that music is an expression, but there's so many ways to express it! This is one of them, but there's so much more that could be done to enhance the expressionalism in this!

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