Take more time into your work...
...if you want to get better that is. You still got the idea of having a 4/4 melody on the kick. You need more variation man. Go listen to some Techno on the di.fm internet radio, so that you can know the sound of a quality mix you need to get to. The bass sounds weak in this song as well, due to the muffled mix. Keeping the volumes below -3db is a good idea to work around with to try and not have the song clipping. You still got potential mate, keep working at it.
It's got an oriental feel to it...
The notes are layed out like an oriental themed song, so it kinda sounds neat when mixed with the strings, bass, etc.
Maybe lower the volume on the sidechained bass a little bit, it's kinda taking up the feel from the rest of the mix...
Thanks for the review Tim. Glad you liked it :D
this is the shit
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.