I need some constructive criticism on how to improve it and what to change. I am only putting this up for that, and I am going to take it down after a few hours. <<<(lol, I guess it was a good thing I didn't take it down)
I am not done with it either, which means THIS ISNT THE FULL SONG.
*EDIT* Forgot to say thanks for the top 5 weekly guys, so Thanks :D Hope you liked the song.