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{sPhly} - Jump Jump (WIP)

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Original vocals from Nordic Stars - Jump Jump

Started working on this this morning and just uploaded this to show everyone my progress, it'll probably be deleted within a day and reuploaded done.

So if anyway takes a listen please give some quick feedback, would be immencely appreciated. :)

NOTE: I know the intro is a little slow, might be boring for some of you, but give it a chance 0:40 is when it hits in. And yes I am aware taht there is no transition YET, haven't worked on one - there'll be a perfect transition when it's done, don't you worry about that :)

EDIT1: Added vocals to the intro
EDIT2: fixed the vocals in the intro to fit the beat better, still not happy with it.
EDIT3: Added subbass

Reviews


Wow! :D

Hey man, you reviewed my song 'End of time', i dunno if you wanted me to check this out, or your other song, i'll probably do both xD
But yeah man, you have some major skills! Like i was really expecting less! (no offense) You deserve some attention man.
I really have nothing to critisize here, keep it up!
Ill be expecting a PM when your done everything. xD
Beats4Beets


Shoephly responds:

^^
I was hoping you'd review only this one, but it's always fun to read reviews anyway. :)

Thanks a lot man, nice to be apprecieated. XD
The song is pretty much done now, finished it yesterday(3:41 track :)), but because of my messy structure (i'm used to it) it's becoming a mastering nightmare, the first half(this) sounds okay, but the rest is soo messy it's unbeliveable, hah. :p

Ofc, i'll try and finish this asap.

Thanks a ton for the review!

-shoephly ^^


Great stuff! Can't wait to listen to more

Wow! What a polished sound. Your vocalist is really talented. Really great work, man.

The only thing I would caution against is that you have a sort of pulsing thing going on in the chorus and it gives a 'slow two' feeling that isn't quite what you're going for, I don't think. Maybe a little snare on the backbeat or a pad to soften the dynamic change? Anywho, that's just a tiny criticism - great song. Keep up the good work!

5/5 - 9/10


Shoephly responds:

First of all, thanks for commenting, means a lot!
secondly, it's not my vocalist. xD, it's from a remix pack i found containing the vocals (at a 20k bitrate sample o.o) and the midi for the bassline.

And yea, i understand that the transition is well; not there. This has to do somewhat with that I'm not done with the piece, but seeing that you commented on it obviously brings it to my attention that's it's a big problem.
It will be worked on and probably finished before friday (the full 4min track :D)

Yet again thanks a ton for the review.
-shoephly :)


Man! I hate those Internet Trolls that bombed me..

Really jumpy song here. Though I agree with the comment about the bassline.

5/5.


Shoephly responds:

hmm, that comment was made before i added the subbass and shit, trying to spice it up. Seems i need to add more.

Thanks a ton for the review ^^

-shoephly


Not bad! ^_^

The chords in the intro are terribly predictable! But still, they fit into the song pretty nicely (:

It sounds very compact at 0.44 after the vocals come in. Lots of things going on there, makes the quality sounds a bit rubbish in a word.

Still, i like your choice of synths and drums!

Not bad ;)

-Tom. x


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Shoephly responds:

Yea, i do realize that, and I am fully aware of it, i kinda skipped the build up, and the only reason i did that was when I made the intro, i sent it to a friend and he told me what he thought etc. When i told him my idea was to speed it up double the tempo I kinda skipped the build up to show him what i meant. xD

This is just a preview upload so obviously it's not great. :P

Thanks a ton for the review!

-shoephly ^^


Great!

I give this 10 in anticipation of the finished song. The only thing i gotta say is you should change up the bass line alittle. maybe add some more punch to it. but it's great!


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Shoephly responds:

I've laways had trubble making a good bass, always too loud, or too low, or not punchy enough xD
But i totally get what you mean, just something i need to work on. :)

Thanks a million for the review ^^

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Credits & Info

Shoephly
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Uploaded
Sep 12, 2010
10:13 AM EDT
File Info
Song
4.2 MB
2 min 19 sec
Score
4.24 / 5.00

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