Original vocals from Nordic Stars - Jump Jump
Started working on this this morning and just uploaded this to show everyone my progress, it'll probably be deleted within a day and reuploaded done.
So if anyway takes a listen please give some quick feedback, would be immencely appreciated. :)
NOTE: I know the intro is a little slow, might be boring for some of you, but give it a chance 0:40 is when it hits in. And yes I am aware taht there is no transition YET, haven't worked on one - there'll be a perfect transition when it's done, don't you worry about that :)
EDIT1: Added vocals to the intro
EDIT2: fixed the vocals in the intro to fit the beat better, still not happy with it.
EDIT3: Added subbass
Wow! :D
Hey man, you reviewed my song 'End of time', i dunno if you wanted me to check this out, or your other song, i'll probably do both xD
But yeah man, you have some major skills! Like i was really expecting less! (no offense) You deserve some attention man.
I really have nothing to critisize here, keep it up!
Ill be expecting a PM when your done everything. xD
Beats4Beets
^^
I was hoping you'd review only this one, but it's always fun to read reviews anyway. :)
Thanks a lot man, nice to be apprecieated. XD
The song is pretty much done now, finished it yesterday(3:41 track :)), but because of my messy structure (i'm used to it) it's becoming a mastering nightmare, the first half(this) sounds okay, but the rest is soo messy it's unbeliveable, hah. :p
Ofc, i'll try and finish this asap.
Thanks a ton for the review!
-shoephly ^^
Great stuff! Can't wait to listen to more
Wow! What a polished sound. Your vocalist is really talented. Really great work, man.
The only thing I would caution against is that you have a sort of pulsing thing going on in the chorus and it gives a 'slow two' feeling that isn't quite what you're going for, I don't think. Maybe a little snare on the backbeat or a pad to soften the dynamic change? Anywho, that's just a tiny criticism - great song. Keep up the good work!
5/5 - 9/10
First of all, thanks for commenting, means a lot!
secondly, it's not my vocalist. xD, it's from a remix pack i found containing the vocals (at a 20k bitrate sample o.o) and the midi for the bassline.
And yea, i understand that the transition is well; not there. This has to do somewhat with that I'm not done with the piece, but seeing that you commented on it obviously brings it to my attention that's it's a big problem.
It will be worked on and probably finished before friday (the full 4min track :D)
Yet again thanks a ton for the review.
-shoephly :)
Not bad! ^_^
The chords in the intro are terribly predictable! But still, they fit into the song pretty nicely (:
It sounds very compact at 0.44 after the vocals come in. Lots of things going on there, makes the quality sounds a bit rubbish in a word.
Still, i like your choice of synths and drums!
Not bad ;)
-Tom. x
Yea, i do realize that, and I am fully aware of it, i kinda skipped the build up, and the only reason i did that was when I made the intro, i sent it to a friend and he told me what he thought etc. When i told him my idea was to speed it up double the tempo I kinda skipped the build up to show him what i meant. xD
This is just a preview upload so obviously it's not great. :P
Thanks a ton for the review!
-shoephly ^^
Great!
I give this 10 in anticipation of the finished song. The only thing i gotta say is you should change up the bass line alittle. maybe add some more punch to it. but it's great!
I've laways had trubble making a good bass, always too loud, or too low, or not punchy enough xD
But i totally get what you mean, just something i need to work on. :)
Thanks a million for the review ^^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Shoephly 
