{sPhly} - Sunset Rave

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{sPhly} - Sunset Rave

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Author Comments

This is my first real attempt to make a song, and i'm curious to see what everyone thinks about it.
This song is nowhere close to the standard of music I've seen here in newgrounds and probably sucks D; xD, but I would truly appreciate constructive feedback since I'm still in the process of learning :P

The program i used was Fruity Loops 9 XXL.

Thanks for listening

EDIT 1:
Replaced the clap with a snare, and changed the end a little, not sure if it's for the better but it's just a slight change.

I will work on the song much more and make it perfect once I actually have some time. :D

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HalostormIII

2010-05-24 13:34:36

awesome

i could listen to this all day and this is your first song so two thumbs up. I like how it has piano and techno at the same time. I have to put this on my ipod

Proskillz
;P HalostormIII

Shoephly responds:

:) I've always enjoyed listening to techno with piano elements, so why change a winning formula? :P

This song could be a lot better in my opinion, I'm still lacking a little in some technical stuff with Fl Studios, once I master the program there will be insanely good music poping out of my account >;D

Thanks for the review
-shoephly

dashthefox

2010-05-24 02:37:30

sound chasing ftw

I like how da rhythm starts to catch up with the smooth beats mon. hope to hear more in the future.

Shoephly responds:

Thanks for the review.

I'm definetly going to be uploading more frequently in the future, but at this precise moment in time I kinda have a writers block and don't really have any inspiration. Let's both hope it won't last for too long xD

-shoephly :)

Genisis82196

2010-05-22 11:06:06

Its...

great for raving like most of my friends it would help if you make a longer one.

Shoephly responds:

About the length I totally agree, but yea, this was my first submission to NG, so definetly not polished.
Now that I think about it I could easily make it longer and better mastered, so who know's I might change it up a lil in the not too distant future. :)

Thanks for the comment!
-shoephly. :)

wackywocky555

2010-05-20 06:46:44

Dude, this is awesome!

Love it.

Shoephly responds:

I'm glad you do. :)

xmikywayx

2010-04-18 09:05:09

Awesome

You're officially on my favourite artists list now ^o^

And if you're actually playing the piano I have even more newfound appreciation for you<33 (Piano peeps unite! >:D)

I'm surprised that you say you're new && all.... Because you're like someone I could idol.

*lessthanthreeeee*

Shoephly responds:

<33 :D
I hate to break this idolism but unfortunaly I have no idea how to play the piano in real life, not good atleast. I've actually always wanted to learn, but yea... just never found the time.
But I have good intentions to learn how to play. :D Bought a midikeyboard and now all i need to do is make one of my many musician friends teach me. xD

I am honoured to have you as a fan :D
Stay tuned for more stuff where I can guarantee will be released around 2 months time (due to study/exams/school)
-shoephly