Could be so much more..
But what it is, is great and beautiful. The distortion gives it a crunchy and yet softer feeling in a way because of what it plays. Though i feel you could actually use the tone of the main instrument to be expanded over a much longer and in-depth song.
The biggest issue i heard was the drums, and not because of the squeeze/bit crusher thing you used on them, cause i like how you used that sound. They didn't feel like they where as emotional in tone as the other instruments, which is the only reason that i am giving this a 9, because otherwise it's great =3
Ack, late response, sorry lol.
And yeah, the drums should probably be a little different. To be honest though, this was a really quick job to get me out of the artist's block.
Thanks for the review! I'll review one of your songs next week.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.