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DiscoRay (WIP)

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been testing around on FL...because i havent been useing it for a long time...and yea something like this came out...i rly dunno what feedback ima get...

but i think it will be some bad feedback...

some places on the song is not rly filled...as in...not much sound goin on

but u give me ure opinion

it can be a bit repetitive ;S sry

but plz do look at the bright side and tell me what i did good on it...and bad....


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Not bad for a WIP

can't wait to here the finished project. i think at around 1:30 u could really focus on using sum sort of heavy synth. But all in all it's a quite epic piece of techno-wizardry XD

Not bad

Not too bad at all, as a work in progress that is. It sounds far from complete though to me. Seems like it's missing more drums and some pads at least. The melody you have here though is very good. Especially the beginning and the end parts were very catchy in my opinion.

There are no rules in music so having a 'bland' song doesn't really mean much. It does have, as Rabid said, a mild disjointed feel at times though. It's almost if the song was about to totally fall apart, and then by some miracle came back with another melody, lol. Interesting track to say the least.

Too bad you lost the file and it will forever be an unfinished piece, but it's not necessarily a bad track at all. Keep up the good work.


A bit too disjointed for me.

The beginning of the song was catchy enough, but I waited to be hooked. Tiny notes with tiny backing beats didn't exactly draw me in. I was waiting for more serious instrumentation to hit. I realize that may not have been your intent, but the composition definitely could have done with more sounds.

There didn't seem to be a central melody-- just a couple bars oft repeated. Nearly 1:50 into the song, I felt like nothing had happened. I considered that I didn't hear much to hum. The sounds themselves were decent, but they weren't nearly as infectious as they could have been.

Another issue I had was that the song seemed to be falling apart at points. At about 1:25, where the same sounds are just repeated over and over, I thought the song was going to end, because I didn't realize that there was another minute and a half left. It just kept going, and then the song switched sounds; it was almost confusing for me.

You don't have a terrible piece on your hands, but I think you need to find more focus. Like I said, the song seemed disjointed. If you charged it up with more sounds (maybe even uptempo ones) and a more coherent melody, you'd have a real winner.

DavidRx responds:


well the track was a wip...and i put it up 2 get the reviews on the current sound of it 2 add more 2 it and maybe cut some parts but i lost the file ;S

and yea i know lazy of me 2 put it up like this xD

but yea its rly empty at some parts and i dident put up much work on it at the time...i found some nice bass and just wanted 2 know if it was on track if any1 liked the aproach cuz it was kinda new 2 me xD

but in the end i lost the FLP. x.x

so i cudent fill the rest or change anything...

maybe ill try something like this again and FINISH IT XD

thx for the review :3

To complete...

Some nice effects.

you are missing...

- more percussion
- Cord progression/choirs


really cool on reeverbing the 8bit thing
kinda empty at some place though...

DavidRx responds:

yea lol
workin on that,....its still a (WIP) so xP

Credits & Info


3.88 / 5.00

Aug 7, 2010
3:27 PM EDT
File Info
7.1 MB
3 min 7 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.