Humm, not bad for your first stab at a Classical
Great, I love Classical music and this is fantastic to listen to.
I have one glaring issue though. At 1:10, the section that starts there feels like your tring to work with too much. The high and low on the panio are spot on as melodys in their own right, but when overlayed there like they are, they don't work together, and end up ruining each other. To narrow it down much more I recomend changing the low keys at 1:14 to 1:17, the second rise of the low keys doesn't quite work, which is the main issue I have with the section.
If you want, inbox me and I'll happily discuss this track with you, as its still a WIP. Mind you, if you want to write this review of as ravings of a idiot, then I'm happy with that too, so long as you keep making music :P.
Thanks a lot of the review and the suggestions:3
I don't plan on working on this until I figure out where I want it to go, but I really appreciate you offering to help.
Good so far!
The melodies are very nice so far. I think you could even expand on this and add some strings and maybe some quiet drums. Keep it up!^^
I've just submitted a song here on NG, too. Would be awesome if you returned the favor and checked it out. :)
and no prob I'll definitely give it a listen at the very least:]
Good I guess
I would say this is good for what it is supposed to be. It's not my liking though so I will rate down a little.
Thanks for listening:3
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.