The song sounds a bit hollow, like there needs to be more in there like a really low volume pad in the background to give some depth or something similar. I like what you did with the stuttering instruments and the static-y sounding clap or other instrument you used. I kinda makes it sound like its coming from an old Tv or other electronic, like you implied with the title Electric Charge. I does give of the feeling of electricity. I just think it could use more to fill out it.
I also think the kick drum would be better with a more hiss-y static sound or maybe a more electronic drum kit. Your going for electricity and I think it would be better if you just went all out with it. But I still think this is a good start, I just think it needs more.
Review: 7.5 (rounded up to 8)
Thank you, your review is very much appreciated, I am working on a couple of projects right now but I'll get to work as soon as possible!