It could be better.
You shall not overrate you own creations, especially because this is a result of a playfull experiment of yours, im not saying i dont like it, lets just say its good.
You know how to manipulate voices and instruments together, keep at it, you have talent.
Did you think I was being serious about the title? Of course its not quite epic enough to warrant that title, I just wanted people to listen to it (plus I couldn't think of a better title). Anyway, I know it needs work, but i'm probably going to just use the themes in it to make something completely new and different sometime.
Interesting song, but not epic.
The song seems to start out slow but it does pick up, I (SUGGEST not COMMAND) that you make the tempo a little faster, there was some parts where I did not even think this was good, but don't get discouraged!!!!! You have a great idea here, I just think its should be more loud, fast, and exhilarating!!!!!!! Give its some more time effort, and love.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.