I agree 99.35% with Kirbyfighter12...

Although I have never made a song (I admit it, I suck at it), I have a huge criticism point. I wouldn't be considered a "Nice Guy" when it comes to music. What can be improved with the song:

Every song ha the main melody, the harmony, and those small little notes (calling them background noises) that nobody pays attention to. If you leave those notes out, the song sounds weird. You need to put every note into every song before submitting it.

You shouldn't mess around with the instruments (Or whatever they are called, again, I suck at it) too much. You should make the instruments sound close.

The main melody has to be heard. You can't just put it in as a background noise. This makes the song unrecognizable, degrading the quality.

The idea is good, but you have to make the pieces flow together; as if they belong together.

Even I was thinking about this (the fusion of music, but like I said, I SUCK at it), but this isn't the style I had in mind. Try to keep at it, though.

... Interesting?

You can ignore kirbyfighter12 although he is right about the synths not fitting well together. I gotta admit tough, at some point of your song it sounds like complete chaos.
You know, what I look for in music is originality. And well. this is unique. It's your own style. You may just want to improve on what you do with your music... make the parts flow together and make sure all sounds you use in the music compliment each other. Good luck!

....Pure ....Crap (putting it niceley)

The Synths Do NOT go Well Together!
What the Hell is this?
The Synths Clash more than and Old person trying to undertand new technology!

Honestly this sounds like you just Used a MIDI file and Splived it Using
an Fruity Loops Studio.
What did you do? Select the Midi Instruments and Click Replace? GOD

Seriously, it's shit like this that make Fruity Loops get the title of "Noobware"

-.- Jeez, Micheal Bay could make a better Score than this (Now that's Saying SOMETHING!)