I like this one. I love the idea and it's got a nice haunting feel to it. I would suggest, however, that maybe you should may strengthen the core parts as the are kind of drowned out by the other parts.
do you like...uh...do you like RPG games...cuz like I kinda do and stuff...
I DO!! :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.