Not bad!

Pretty decent even, it's a mix between trance, drumstep , breakbeat and some electro influences. I know you wanna focus on the bass, but your kick is really drowning under all that bass, you should EQ it abit, cut the lowest freq's so it doesn't get in the way of the bass :)
Your snare is great, i like it alot.
Bass needs just a bit more power to it, not louder but just more power .
Rest sounds good man, keep it up!

8/10
5/5

Check out my dubstep tune Invasion, I think you're gonna like it if you make this kind of music :)

Very catchy!

Like you said, a catchy melody, I like it!
It had a nice ending and a good coupled, you are getting better at this!