Hey,
So this song has connected to me and how i feel the most of all the songs ive made, its quite long but i hope i keep it varied enough for you not to get bored. Any tips on comments on how to make it better are greatly appreciated especially about mastering and the like,
Thanks for listening,
PIE
You need some work.
Im saying that you should really focus on working with your flow.
It just seems dead, like youre whispering or something, put some more life in to the track.
I think youll be more satisfied with it. Near the middle of this song you pick up some, but then drop back again. Give it a try :D
Thanks for the review, and listening back to it now i think your right. I'm not much of an enthusiastic person in general, but i'll try putting in some more energy next time i try something like this!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
PIED3 
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