Dying (voice only)

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I got a new mic. (which i'm very pleased with!) and have decided to record some voice only things for a bit. This is a fresh recording of an old song, but i have got some new work in progress and i'm planning on writing a lot more.
Out of the frying pan and into the fire
Out of coffin and onto the funeral pyre
You can't get much more dire than dieing
Kid you wasted your life trying to be good.
Trying to be something more than you knew you ever would be
See, now as your blood spills onto the ground and you look all around
the eary sound of angels
or devils around your body bleeding
chanting encantations ignoring your pleeding
lamententations, for them to leave you in peace
as you leave the world in pieces.
Your chest filled with bullets, your head with a thesis
about how maybe there is in after life
and despite the fact you covet your neighbours wife
they might still let you in for being a nice guy
it's worth a try, so you pray to a god you ignored all your life.
But you can't remember any hebrew prayers
and what if Jewdaism is the one true religion
you search your brain in despair
as your mind conjures up a ferly vision
of an Islamic after life with glorious banquets
in a perfect paradise, and maybe these fears could have been overted
if only when offered, you'd gladly converted.
But the hell of jahannam looks no better than the hell of the bible
You can't quell your fears without resorting to libel
so damn the god of yahweh and allah, and curse the creater thats zeus and il onkar
strike down the monstors of hades and brahma, burn down the thrones of efik and basa
cause what good have they done you, from your chest spills your life
yours body goes limp and your pallor turns a virgin white
Feel free to use this for whatever you want, i don't really care about credit but if you make something, please show me!

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love the ending.

beautiful man. i love the pacing and the change of tone.
"and despite the fact you covet your neighbors wife they might still let you in for being a nice guy"

the ending is great. the way death is described. wow.

PIED3 responds:

Thanks very much for the review, i'm thrilled people are enjoying this!


People should be a bit more positive about this.

PIED3 responds:

Heh, i'm glad you think that. Cheers for the review.

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Jan 23, 2012
12:41 PM EST
Spoken Word
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1.1 MB
1 min 12 sec

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