The song is awesome, a little empty, even for a chip tune, could use an arpeggio synth or something lol.
The voice is what kills it, needs a little more editing of it. The voice is a little overpowering. And doesn't really fit the song, but I am sure you know that, if the lyrics are real XD.
THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LETTERS YOU PUT ON MY COMPUTER SCREEN. HOW DID YOU GET ON MY COMPUTER ALL THE WAY FROM YOUR COMPUTER!?!?
WHAT DO YOU MEAN THAT THE VOICE NEEDS EDITING? I SPENT 9 HOURS EDITING IN MSPAINT.