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by the way, i have an updated version here
http://www.ilike.com/arti st/Zodiax/dashboard/songs

Verse1
can you feel pain from the people around
can you see the sorrow from the people around
can you hear the cry's from the children of now
can you taste tears from the rain falling down

do you have a goal that doesn't just involve your own gain
or are only looking for the glory of stardom and fame
is all you see, are dollar bills with big golden chains
or diamonds that sparkle from the fortune and fame

do you have something to protect, something deep in your chest
something so close to yourself when other could care even less
is worth your giving best, the risks, trials and tests
then keep it close to you, savor it with every last breath

can you feel pain from the people around
can you see the sorrow from the people around
can you hear the cry's from the children of now
can you taste tears from the rain falling down

Can you hear the sound of when a small child cry's
can you feel the pain of when somebody dies
can you see the strength, of when somebody fights
can you taste the air of the world at night

can you, feel the beating, of somebody's heart
can you feel the sorrow of families splitting apart
can you see the light, inside of the dark
can you even care about this world of ours

Verse2
can you feel the love from a family of ten
can you hear the joy from when a new life begins
can you see the laughter from a pair of best friends
can you taste the love when you and your lover are kissing

do you feel any joy when your helping another
and do you feel anything at all when you see struggle of others
do you still feel the love when your kissing your lover
or do you not even care, and don't even bother to ponder

have you ever tried following your heart
and be true to yourself, straight from finish to start
do you hold onto your loved ones, and will never let go
and keep em so close, just so you can watch em grow

can you feel the love from a family of ten
can you hear the joy from when a new life begins
can you see the laughter from a pair of best friends
can you taste the love when you and your lover are kissing

Can you hear the sound of when a small child cry's
can you feel the pain of when somebody dies
can you see the strength, of when somebody fights
can you taste the air of the world at night

can you, feel the beating, of somebody's heart
can you feel the sorrow of families splitting apart
can you see the light, inside of the dark
can you even care about this world of ours

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you got style

keep it up man... nice work

Zodiax responds:

haha, thanks man, i appreciate it

Nice!

Im diggin the stucture of this one, "can ya". The flow was on point for most of the song, but there was a few points when the lyrics were a bit difficult to get. Maybe bring the vocs up a bit more. Other than that, really great track, nice work bro.

Zodiax responds:

ha yeah i do get off, this was just a rough draft though, so i'm probably going to go back and finish recording it and redo some parts, thanks for checking it out by the way

nice man

Pretty deep lyrics right here. I dunno what the first guy was saying really. I thought ya did a pretty good portraying emotion. Mabye they should give it a shot and see how they do? Oh well. The hook was where it was at! I thought it really brought the track together. Well keep up and keep banging out these tracks! 5/5

Zodiax responds:

thanks man, lol the chorus was the funnest part in recording this song, i'm glad you liked it

nice

a happy sad song, really got to me, and don't even know how :/

keep it up

Zodiax responds:

i'm glad you like it man :)

I liked it...

I think you could have done better... Not saying your voice is horrible... But you could always pull a T-pain and add some effects to your voice. Try looking for Gsnap... Its a FL Studio Add on. Works great.

I love the lyrics... I feel as if maybe you could have sung it faster at times... but its not bad... keep up the good work and il keep watching

Ziggy

Zodiax responds:

thanks man i appreciate it, i actually have g-snap, but i don't really like to use it, but maybw in future tracks i'll implement it, this was kind of an experiment i was working on, so...i'll probably come back and redo this, thanks for checking it out by the way

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