(For some odd fucking reason people feel like when a song or flash isn't the best in the world that they have to go and act like an asshole instead of giving advice. =_= AssJacks._.)
Here is my honest and hopefully helpful insight.
Eh. I dunno. :/ The lyrics were okay. x___x
Your singing: It was below average. You need to work on pitch and hitting high notes. Your voice does crack in. . . well quite a few areas. But I do my reasearch when I write reviews, I reread your replies to the previous reviews that are shown, I guess I understand you weren't feeling all that great. xD
Guitar: Not a big score on originality, but hey, it was decent. Geezus my skull hurts (not b/c of you, I've bumped my head x____x)The guitar was better than I could do, thats for sure. But if these are still your skills I'd keep practicing. Don't let the Hypocritical moron-bags keep you from trying. ^_^
Keep practicing and submitting, and next time you see some fuckhead flame you pointlessly in a review, hit the lil golden x button in their review and spread word round to people to do that when they see an infamatory review as well. I'm not an admin but I can't stand seeing people being arseholes for no reason.
You have potential, keep practicing. Imma add you to my favs to see if you come up with anything new. ^_^ Cheers,