i actualy love it
il be different
ill give you a ten cos i think its pretty good
obviously the singing isnt perfect but i can sympathise cos i cant sing but i like it at 2:20 when you go insane
i realy liked it
5/5
10/10
download
faved
but please work on that singing
o_e
(For some odd fucking reason people feel like when a song or flash isn't the best in the world that they have to go and act like an asshole instead of giving advice. =_= AssJacks._.)
Here is my honest and hopefully helpful insight.
Eh. I dunno. :/ The lyrics were okay. x___x
Your singing: It was below average. You need to work on pitch and hitting high notes. Your voice does crack in. . . well quite a few areas. But I do my reasearch when I write reviews, I reread your replies to the previous reviews that are shown, I guess I understand you weren't feeling all that great. xD
Guitar: Not a big score on originality, but hey, it was decent. Geezus my skull hurts (not b/c of you, I've bumped my head x____x)The guitar was better than I could do, thats for sure. But if these are still your skills I'd keep practicing. Don't let the Hypocritical moron-bags keep you from trying. ^_^
Keep practicing and submitting, and next time you see some fuckhead flame you pointlessly in a review, hit the lil golden x button in their review and spread word round to people to do that when they see an infamatory review as well. I'm not an admin but I can't stand seeing people being arseholes for no reason.
You have potential, keep practicing. Imma add you to my favs to see if you come up with anything new. ^_^ Cheers,
Jack
Meh...so-so
It was pretty good, but there were TONS of things to fix. Everything needs to be equalized better (or you simply need better recording equipment), you guitar frequently sounds out of tune and so do your vocals on occasion. I don't know if you laid down those tracks separately, but you should if you didn't and really listen to what they sound like and make sure that is the best sound you can get (I'm not trying to insult you, so don't feel insulted). What I'm saying is that it wasn't bad, but it definitely could have been better.
Ok for starters YOU ARE RIGHT! I know I normally layer it better. Also equalize it to work better. What happened was a girl I once liked kinda screwed me over. She came back and fucked me over even more. In a pissed of rage (and a bottle of jack) I recorded this once. Yes it could be better, but I decided to leave it sounding kind fucked up. Mainly because the relationship was equaly fucked up. Thanks for the constructive review. This is an older song I recorded and when she fucked me over again I decided to post it again. I will not do anything else with this song. My next is going to be much better. Thanks again.
shal i explain you how to SING?
nice gitaar playing the gitaar can stay but schut your fucking mouth becous you CANT SING!!
Hehehe I know I cant sing. I had listen to Nirvana for a while. A bunch of shit went down. Then this song came out. I kinda did a shity job singing to due to a bottle of jack. If you want to here what I really sound like when I sing (sober) listen to Off Key World. That is more how I really sing on a normal day. If you listen to it plz review so I can have a review on how my voice (in normal sercumstances) sound like. Thanks again
bollocks. total bollocks.
did you get the vocals by kicking a cat in the stomach? because whoever (or whatever) sang this needs to be 'put down'.*does a little jig*^_^
I was trying the whole Nirvana thing at the time. That alcohol, and pain. So I'm sorry you didn't like it.