Good....but a little.....noisy?

Slighly to loud or is it me?

Anyway , good song but try untying the song I also approve that it's messy !

~Keep Going~

Well

It could use some adjustments, it's sometimes a little messy, to be honest.
But just one big thing that has to be changed is the sound that kicks in at 00:30.
It's a double sound with a bottom note and the major third of the note.
But the thing is that the first of those four chords used in this song is F-minor, and an F with a third major makes it F-major. And that just doesn't sound right.
So it could be that it's just part of the sound, but that way it's not usable at the bottom of a minor chord.
You could shove that sound up to it's parallel major third to make it sound right, so instead of F(with an A, that shoud be a G#) it would be a G# (with a C, which is the same as in the third chord).
Or you could just remove the sounds, I strongly recommend changing it.
It's hard finding the right words in music theory english, 'cause i'm not english :p
If you're not that much into music theory, most of this will not make any sense, but I hope it helps ;p
So I recommend to shove it up a little like on the third chord, or you just remove it.
For the rest of the song, nice going! Good luck with it :D
(I should learn to write smaller reviews about just one sound)

yyyeeeessssss

you and JF Rif own the show on this song. I think ViZ's and Irish's versions are over rated

wow

im just wondering why hasent who ever did this origoaly (757irish)
killed you all

this song never gets old

5/5 as well :D