I really liked the song, but there was one aspect that was killing the overall feel for me.
The clap/snare steady beat that comes in the beginning.
Put some reverb on it or something. You have this aqueous synth in the back, which is later met by a liquidated bass feel, and you have this dry snare clap mushing the sound of the overall piece.
Not bad, besides that.
I have some reverb on it already, but I guess it's true what they say--you can never have much reverb. x3 Thanks for the kind words.