OK.
Ill beat, but the lyrics were mad iffy. It sounds fine, and thats fine, and it has a message kind of, so thats good. But you could do so much more with your rhymes, every syllable counts. Check some of my shit.
New track with beat by DJ Skullhead
OK.
Ill beat, but the lyrics were mad iffy. It sounds fine, and thats fine, and it has a message kind of, so thats good. But you could do so much more with your rhymes, every syllable counts. Check some of my shit.
great!
I love how ya used the Silent Hil beat. DJ Skullhead did a great job making it. As for the flows. Lyrics were good and flow was on point. Mixing on point as well. 5/5 and download. This is one of your best in my opinion. Keep it up!
Klazik
your
lyrics are great for this beat. I like the echo you used in the first verse. Dude hearing this im smiling lol this shits good "and im ashamed..cause i cant seem to change" Also the guy/girl talking in the parts of the song add to the feeling to this song. Great man.
5/5
Emdee
Great
Best rap ive heard (in my opinion) here on NG. Rhymes perfectly.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.