This project took a while to finish. an electro inspired by a friend of mine, lyrics and style and such.
hope you enjoy it.
please rate and review fairly, and please enjoy the song.
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lyrics: its kind of obvious that i have got this thing for you,
you're the kind of girl who makes me move
i love you, i hate you just give me some more
dont make me take the hinges off this bedroom door.
i can tell you im not playing by the rules
i can tell ya, you are being such a fool
i can tell ya this is not for you to choose
i can tell ya (x3), yeah
Catchy
Good lyrics, good melody, good background and overall enjoyable to listen to, which is of course what music's about. Just like the comment below me, I also really enjoy that bass, and I thought way you tweaked the vocals at 2:00 and then gave a good pause in the melody after was pretty wicked. The ending was also pretty sick too, the way you came to the stop was awesome.
well hey im glad my vocals went well, i was always concerned about that
Whoa.
Started off kinda awkward, but it get a lot better once that sweet sliding bass came in! I would've liked the bass to have a bit more oomph, as I've heard in some other house songs. It's really deep and thrumming, with like.. accents on the sliding notes. It's still good though, the vocals are an interesting touch. It has a nice beat, the saw is nice when it is sidechained, and the the plucky melody was good too.
Good work! Make more!
9/10
5/5 (+ 0.31) 5.65 voting power
hey thanks! this was helpful, ill work on the bass next time i do something like this with some more power in mind. im happy that you liked the "plucky melody" that was probably my favorite part.
OMG
This is totally super snazzy. Definitely pumpin' music. ;)
Shut yo' flap trap.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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