Nice sound
Well, it's not a bad effort, especially considering that you're leaning on the softer sounds of the piano, where it would be relatively easy to make use of the louder notes, which give more of an impact. Great use of synths at the end, but it could have looped better, to encorporate them into the start, perhaps so that the whole piece doesn't sound like it's got such an abrupt end to it. If you're not aiming for a loop, perhaps just make it a fade out, instead.
Additional variation would be a good way to take the track forward. Perhaps a light and happy sounding upbeat solo would do the trick, perhaps cutting down some of the other bits for time, just to give it a nice hand all in all.
I've heard some of your stuff around on Newgrounds before, it's clear that I will have to keep a watch out for more of your works.
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