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Seashore Metropolis

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Almost perfect, just tell me what's wrong THEN it will be perfect :D

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Nice sound

Well, it's not a bad effort, especially considering that you're leaning on the softer sounds of the piano, where it would be relatively easy to make use of the louder notes, which give more of an impact. Great use of synths at the end, but it could have looped better, to encorporate them into the start, perhaps so that the whole piece doesn't sound like it's got such an abrupt end to it. If you're not aiming for a loop, perhaps just make it a fade out, instead.

Additional variation would be a good way to take the track forward. Perhaps a light and happy sounding upbeat solo would do the trick, perhaps cutting down some of the other bits for time, just to give it a nice hand all in all.

I've heard some of your stuff around on Newgrounds before, it's clear that I will have to keep a watch out for more of your works.

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Sawdust responds:

Whoah, thanks then, man!

Anyway sure, why not, I'll try and get a solo in there. Maybe throw in a bass melody and drums. Glad you're looking out.

Near perfect.

I felt it did run a little long though... Other than that is solid!
Excellent use of instruments, particularly the piano.
Quite calming, and carries a feeling that complements the title you gave the piece.

Thanks,
- Celx
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Sawdust responds:

Yeah, it is a bit long. I should probably trim some parts then, reduce two piano patterns being played to one, two synths to one, etc. Maybe I'll make it more complex.

Serene and beautiful

This sounds extremely calm and soothing on the nerves, really enjoy how it just keeps you calm and fuzzy inside for no reason at all.

Piano: This sounds quite glorious and I like how it stays calm the whole time as well, quite serene here.

Beach sounds: They sound quite calm, nice work there as well.

Synth: Also soothing

Overall: This is a pretty soothing piece, couldn't really think of any words to describe this.

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SCTE3

Sawdust responds:

Thanks. That's a first!

Well...

I really don't know what's wrong with this song. I listened to it a few times in a row now and couldn't find anything I could critizise. ^^

I like the melodies here a lot. They create a very laid-back atmosphere. The background instruments intensify this atmosphere as they hold themselves in the background very nicely.

Only thing you could maybe add are some sound fx, like wind or water... but other than that, the song is fine!

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Sawdust responds:

Thanks so much!

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Uploaded
Dec 26, 2009
6:06 AM EST
Genre
Ambient
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6.7 MB
5 min 51 sec

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