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Best McRapper

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nowadays, they say they want me for an album
ev'rybody wants a gift, i'm the kid that found one
Never can I sound dumb, Sendin in the loud drums
It's ya boy makin tracks askin 'Wasn't that fun?'

The labels want me, funny sonny, but I can't go corporate
Cuz music ain't bout money, from-the streets rappers is overwith
I got a flow that hits, but I don't need posters, kid
I'm kickin college knowledge so you'll pick it up and notice it.

And yes you know it's sick, Call me Mr. Yuck
cause I'm poisonous on tracks, whack rappers eat it up

I'm comin calm like a bomb, said I'm funny like AIDS
I'm like the call to your mom when you got caught for rape

Man I'm serious, hearin all this frontin on the mic
is a disgrace to this amazing hip hop bumpin we call life

If you're stuntin that's a strike, got three and youre out
The next rapper with a grill is gettin punched in his mouth!

I been down in the South, I spent my time on the East
I lived in the West where I learned to rhyme on the beat
And now they finally see, how to be findin the heat
So they approach the coldest flowa ask to buy a CD

And yes I'm tryin to eat, but gettin rich ain't motivation
I would rather be a broke emcee, leadin a nation

It just doesn't seem that cool to me, These videos with nudity
misogyny and expensive rented cars and jewelry
I discovered, it's another way that they are foolin the
public cuz they love it so they're droppin outta school to be

tourist industry laborers, see em rock a smile and cap
i can hear em askin "do you want fries with that?"

no i wanna order an espresso with solutions
a che guevara latte, double shot of revolution
the product that i'm choosin shouldn't make me stupid
from hormones, and overtones of pollutants

the FDA is useless, we imbalanced chemically
it's with the way they keep us slaves cuz we all challenged mentally

psychological diseases spread in these implantations
let me ask you what do you think they put in vaccinations?

livin like a vacation in this nation of indulgence
pull this truth out of my head with every tracks divulgence
Isn't it repulsive how we are so impulsive?
I'll preach this on the beat like I be comin from the pulpit

Lyrically I am a sultan, a Prince among paupers
Hearin diamonds in the cut, shinin brighter than imposters
with my fellow hip hoppers there ain't no way for you to stop us
when you hear a spit this sick you know that Poe is the author

on tracks i blow it up proper, unlike the twin towers
rippin on the wax, i can leave it scratchin for hours
don't make it rain, make it shower, bring some pain for the powers
I am what I eat, see these emcees get devoured

You want sweetness, I'm sour. On the joint I am blunt.
When I breathe I see these cowards get the point and they run.
I will destroy with no gun, when I'm employing my lungs
to be syllabically attacking A to Z, 10 thru 1.

And all these brains that seem dumb, signs posted so blatantly
I can see it in your eyes, a lighted sign that reads VACANCY

I know that I would hate to be anybody else
So when I do this music, truth is I just spit for myself

I see a mass of apathetic bodies waiting to be used
There's a lack of active antibodies, zombies ensue
Calmed by a ruse, lead along by the news
These casters are actors! Even their comments are cued!

You think they're sovereign? Truth is they're paid a healthy salary
For a voice and a look that has you watching your calories
So you're missin the fallacy, all these suckers of phallus be
people too, deceivin you like they're not paid hourly

actin like untouchables, these people are liars
the only ones that are untouchable in my mind are minors
but even Rome is holding back the facts from the choir
the Pope's original position was on his knees for a Sire

No, I am not a liar, if I say it, I mean it
Do you really think these rapists give a damn about Jesus?
How can you believe this? You're being deceived kid!
You won't get it til I set the Tek against my head and squeeze it {POP!}

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love it

you got me chuclking a bit whne you mentioned coffee:P

Dayum

Stepping up big time. Seriously. Very well done. My only issue is how you seem to start as a "I'm the shit" track, but you finish with it being a knowledge track. I almost feel like it lacks that topical consistancy. Other than that, great track, I'll keep your streak of 10's going

Gasmasq responds:

It's called 'building rapport with the listener'. How can I expect anyone to care what I have to say if I'm not the shit? lol
Thanks for continuing my streak Wyze.

[KOA]
..poe..

Tight flow once again

You've got good flow, rythm, delivery, and a lot of snappy lines in this one. I feel like you've found a good sound and are putting thought into what you write, which is wicked. So, good job on another track!

Now some critical thoughts. The lines stand alone very well, but I couldn't tie it all together and get what you're trying to say overall. I think the song would stand stronger if you gave it some structure. That doesn't mean add a chorus or anything else specific, just be aware of where it starts, where it ends, and how it gets there. As well, some distinct dynamics would be nice: highs and lows in energy, changes in the pace of the flow, etc.

Yup. As always with my criticism, take it and use it or call me a fool, either is cool with me, haha. Keep dropping these, it's always a pleasure to listen.

Gasmasq responds:

I dig what you're sayin. This was pretty much just an artist summary track, kinda going back to my roots, hence the lack of structure. Check out the track I just posted, "Happy Goes Lucky" if you're lookin for MASSIVE amounts of concise 'beginning, middle, end' format lol.

Thanks for the insightful review, tingtonger. Stay tuned!

a wonderful surprise

now thats a hot track, straight real words, with a great flow and a meaningful message.

merry christmas man, and an excellent track

5/5

Gasmasq responds:

thanks very much for showing some love, Zodiax. hope your holidays are going well.

[KOA]poe

This is what Im talking about!

"If you want to know whats wrong with the world listen to Patriot" and now...Best McRapper. The adlibs are excellentro. I like the non-structured songs (no choruses), so, yep. The flow was almost spot on through out, expect this line "cuz we all challenged mentally" it sounded rushed (but I'll round this 9.9 up to 10, because its Bitchmas). Great work, can't wait for the new year and the new music from ya. Keep it up Judge Judy!

Gasmasq responds:

FINALLY!! I've been waiting for a 10 from you for so long... jeez. But since you told me it actually got a 9.9 I don't feel like I deserve it :(

In response, I personally don't feel that that particular line is rushed.
I'm finding that ad libs add more personality to a song, as well as filling blank space with something that doesn't HAVE to rhyme...
The 'lack' of structure I actually picked up from MF Doom (of DangerDoom). That's how I started, but now that I can count bars and know where to arrange certain parts, I think it sounds a lot better.

Stay tuned! I'll be dropping a new one before the year's out!

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Dec 25, 2009
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3 min 45 sec

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