this aint that bad but i guess because this is the only rap i heard on newgrounds so meh pretty good
not to bad, tho im sick of hearing the will smith line in every rap on NG
0:00 Very chill and sexy jass musack.
0:15 Your flow is pretty awesome. Your rhymes swerve everywhere.
0:40 Yeah, I can see the semblance to Deltron 3030. You should explore this vibe a lot more often.
1:00 There's the Fresh Prince of Bel Air line.
1:18 interesting little bass line on the side of my ear :)
1:35 This is true Prozac happy right here :)
1:50 My hands are flying. Well, in my head.
2:00 You flipped those drums pretty tight.
2:20 Wow this woman has got some pipes. Get her on one of your other songs!
2:35 WOW THIS IS TIGHT. best part of the song. do a "SBTRKT-Wildfire"-esque song for me, why don't you? It'd pwn everything.
3:33 This is just swag. Do scatting more often, and the background drums (the pen slapping) is awesome. The beatboxing is awesome. The El-Ghaddafi rhyme was hot. I wished you kept going.
Yeah, this is perfect for the comp. You did really well. I recommend you make like 4 tracks out of this, because each section was pretty pumping. I wanted to hear more, and then you'd switch the style. Cheers brother.
Are you... are you Deltron Zero ?
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