Very Good Melody line
The melody is very moving. It doesn't have a dull moment for it is like it is singing and very free. The only thing to be consider is the range of the instrument you are writing with. For this composition you can review more on the Strings and Flutes. What are their ranges, what range does it perform the best?
Overall track is great. So I give you 9 stars for that. Keep up the good work!
Thanks, I did notice screeching of the instruments when they were in strange octaves.
This composition is not half bad... It's very thoughtful and dramatic but light. It is a unique piece of work for sure.
A way to improve would be to work on the pitch. Personally, I found it a little too high-pitched in most places, which left it with a very sharp sound that destroyed my ability to enjoy the song fully.
All in all, not a bad submission, but it needs a little work in my opinion.
Thanks for the review! I'll try to work on not overdoing the pitches.
Though, to be honest, I am getting sick of people trolling through the new music section and giving them all ones en masse.