Very Good Melody line
The melody is very moving. It doesn't have a dull moment for it is like it is singing and very free. The only thing to be consider is the range of the instrument you are writing with. For this composition you can review more on the Strings and Flutes. What are their ranges, what range does it perform the best?
Overall track is great. So I give you 9 stars for that. Keep up the good work!