the lyrics are like something the beatles might write
hmm...i liked that
i liked the comment with the "semi" it cracked me up :D btw, they don't like semi in japan, maybe you didn't look it up thoroughly....anyway, the music is ok, it's boring as hell..but ok, if you can listen to semi, i can listen to your music :D
Any idiot with a computer can use a program to create beats... like Hamzawy... so don't even judge my music, all the instruments and vocals are ME. I don't think I'm so great either, I just think you have a lot of nerve when you don't even have talent. Your music sucks, you can't even do it right on the computer when you have a million chances to go back and fix it... My music is done in one take most times. But I know your mom is probably like, "Come on, let me get on the computer." so I'll let you go. peace.
the first 10 sec reminded me of an insect in japan called "semi " !! it's really noisy ...sorry i couldn't continue listening ....!!
Semi, cicada, is the unannounced official summer insect of Japan, along the red dragonfly (akatombo) and firefly (hotaru). Semi is nostalgic, semi is sweet. Semi has been the topic in various Japanese novels.
The life of semi is as sentimental as the stories it's featured. They live seven years underground in almost inanimate form, and then suddenly crawl up to earth, leaving their hard shell behind. Looking for partner, they climb to a tree to sing. Then they mate, and die, all within one week.
In autumn, one can find their hard shells everywhere, cracking under footsteps.
Semi is relatively large, harmless insect with two wings. I rarely see them airborne but I suppose they are capable of flying medium distances. There are various breeds of cicadas. There are known to be seventeen year periodical cicada.
Cicada's beautiful sound is a sign of Japanese summer.
Cool song. I like the structure, with the repeated piano riff working off the guitar.
Thanks, this song was spur of the moment. I don't think I could ever recreate the feeling of it because I don't know how to play the keyboard. I just bullshitted my way through this song within a few hours, and kept adding more and more until I was satisfyed.
This has such a good feeling about it. Sounds like you had so much fun recording it :D
At least to me.
Thanks for the positive feedback. I'll try to write more songs like this one. This song is definately on it's own shit. My other stuff is alot different.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.