Um. I dont know what to say..
Ok, If my musically challenged mind is telling something, its giving me a bunch of random thoughts right now about your song. On that note Im not gonna tell you much on what you should work on, but your style..lol Sounds like Hardcore goofy. At one point it sounds like Cyclops just walked in and started pounding shit, then the next minute it sounds like butterfly in the wind flying around innocently, then here comes the cyclops smashing the butterfly like a coke can. I can tell that you really put effort into it. Your fade ins and outs are almost perfect, your intro and endings are cool, but take away some tracks, and reorganize them, cause It sounds like a bunch a cool ideas just thrown out there. Oh and ty for reviewing my music. Im not that popular because alot of people dont like to admit talent and diversity, alot of people wanna hear a song like that one song, if you know what I mean. Well to the next song..